April 24, 2006

Defying Definition!


Can I call you a friend?
Because you’ll listen
to my ravings and ranting,
however inane
Because you’ll hear
the sorry unsaid.

Will I call you a friend?
Because you don’t see
my philanderings;
innumerable may be.
Because you don’t look
for those promises unkept;
that lack of sensitivity.

May I call you a friend?
Because you matter;
though senselessness pervades.
And I look around for you.
Because you’re the hold
while life rushes out from under my feet.

7 comments:

  1. : )

    beautifully penned, yet again.

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  2. So very nice. One can have many friends, but a really true friend is like a rare diamond.

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  3. zeitgeist,
    Barter makes for a business partnership, whereas spontaneous giving makes for friendship.
    Going with what you say would also make all business associates friends.

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  4. Very nice. Defined a friend very well.
    By the way 'id it is' reminds me of the Pearl Jam song 'I got id' :)

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  5. wow
    amazing post
    i guess id be an exclamation mark !!!
    gr8 blog
    LOL

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  6. Yes, by all means call me a friend. God is giving me eyes to see beyond color, religion and cultural differences and my life is enriched by many people because of this... :o)

    PS. I would be the orange flowery symbol.

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